this is a really great piece of art work... the color is right on point and the shading on the character is beautiful, including the clothing and accessories... i especially like the way the light glares off of her leg, pistol and arm... the one thing i think it is missing overall is texture... i'd love to see some texture in the grass, maybe even subtle... i would also like to see something more in the sky for the background... maybe a blurred out horizon or some clouds with bird silhouettes or something like that... the plants behind the chair could use some darkening for shadow effect and i see a patch of grass to the left that seems to be missing color... overall i think it's amazing and i couldn't even come close to what you have accomplished here... great work
not bad. The feet and ankles are bent somewhat unnaturally- too much curve on her right foot. Also, the way her feet are positioned is akward. They are bent in different directions, which, if you try to do yourself, feels really uncomfortable and unbalanced.
I like the concept, I feel her feet are a little off, too curved downward into the shoe? I am no expert tho! And the light effect to the right is very distractingly bright. However I love the coloration of the piece and her pose is excellent. I also think you did a great job with the proportions in conjunction to the entire body.
The drawer already received this critique about feet, but he replied that he tried and it worked... I made only colors... Thank you so much for comment.
Excellent line art and subtle but beautiful colour. The face of Zalia is the weakest part of the ilustration. I think her facial expresion is lacking something. Everything else is really well done.
the color is right on point and the shading on the character is beautiful, including the clothing and accessories...
i especially like the way the light glares off of her leg, pistol and arm... the one thing i think it is missing overall is texture...
i'd love to see some texture in the grass, maybe even subtle...
i would also like to see something more in the sky for the background... maybe a blurred out horizon or some clouds with bird silhouettes or something like that...
the plants behind the chair could use some darkening for shadow effect and i see a patch of grass to the left that seems to be missing color...
overall i think it's amazing and i couldn't even come close to what you have accomplished here...
great work
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